Dear my pencil case,
How long have you been with me, pencil case! Nothing has changed except the materials inside for seven years, and it had been so long that I couldn't miss you everyday. You never say anything even you're ruined. Will you forgive me, and forgive me forever?
The first time I met you was the day I went to the department store to buy a character bag. Then, I saw you hanging on that bag. You had a long time with me and your bag. Though that's gone now, I hope you to stay with me forever.
I think you're also tired staying in backpacks. I don't know how much do you like me, or even hate me. However, I will be always with you, and I'll also make you never get lost from me.
It's amazing that you have been with me for thousands of days. I really think you'll never forget me. I will always love you, and never make you out of my sight. I'm going to miss you when you're lost, so I hope you to be with me!
From your best friend,
Human (=Sky=Ha-neul)
Hi Han-neul,
답글삭제This is a good ode but try to use more descritpive language and personifications to make the ode more poetic.
Hi!
답글삭제This is a nice ode to your pencil case. You have to try to use more descriptive language in your ode. Keep working hard~
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)
You're ode was very good and easy to read. But I think it will be better if you have pictures...!
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